Traditional publishing vs. self publishing

Happy New Year! I know I’m a little bit late, but I hope 2020 brings you lots of happiness and success, especially if you’re querying or plan to self publish a novel this year.

2019 was a particularly challenging year for me, for so many reasons, and some of the struggles aren’t quite over yet, so 2020 should be a pretty interesting and exciting year. I’m hoping to be in a completely different place by the end of this year (physically and mentally), I’ve got some big plans that I’d like to pay off in the next 12 months, and I’m going to need some accountability. Which is where you come in!

I’m not a huge fan of resolutions, but I do have a few intentions for the coming year, and the main one relates to my writing.

In 2020, I’m going to publish my first novel, The Fair Queen.

I’ve decided to self publish instead of pursuing traditional publishing any further, for several reasons. I haven’t decided on an exact date yet, as I need to complete another round of rewrites, send the manuscript to a professional editor, and give it a good polish before it’s ready for publication. I’m aiming for September, but as we all know, things happen and plans change, so I won’t announce an official release date until I’ve at least engaged an editor, in case their schedule doesn’t quite fit with a September launch.

So, I thought I’d explain why I’ve decided to go down the self publishing route. I’m going to weigh up the pros and cons of both self publishing and traditional publishing, as there are definite benefits to both, it’s just about personal preference and circumstances really, so don’t worry, I’m not just going to try and convince you that self publishing is the best option for everyone.

Let’s get started, shall we?

What’s the difference between traditional and self publishing?

In a nutshell, traditional publishing means a publishing house buys the rights to your book, and then they take on the cost of printing and (some) marketing of your novel. The publisher pays you an advance, which they then recoup from sales, and once that’s been paid back you start to earn royalties. Your agent gets a cut too, usually around 15%.

With self publishing, the upfront costs of printing and marketing your novel all fall on you, but once the book starts to sell you won’t have to split the profits with anyone – except perhaps your sales agent, e.g. Amazon.

And that’s pretty much it. Except, obviously there are a million and one other little things that tip the scale in either direction, depending on your specific circumstances and needs.


The pros and cons of traditional publishing

The number one benefit of traditional publishing is access – access to the best editors and cover designers in the business, access to a much larger market of buyers thanks to a big marketing budget/team and contacts in every major bookstore. Access to information and knowledge that takes years to amass, and thousands of pounds (or dollars, euros, etc.) spent on degrees and courses, membership to professional organisations, and everything else it takes to be at the top of your professional game.

The other main benefit is, of course, the money, as you won’t pay a penny up front and will actually be paid a lump sum for your hard work, before any books have even sold.

Unfortunately, book advances aren’t quite what they used to be (what industry hasn’t had to make cuts?), and they’re normally paid in 3 instalments – the first on signing the contract with the publisher, the second on delivery of the completed manuscript, and the third on publication. And, as we all know, publishing is a very long process, so these payments could be a year or more apart. So even if you were lucky enough to receive a £50,000 advance, you won’t receive it all in one go, and if you’re a full time writer or decide to quit your 9-5 on receiving your book deal, you might struggle to pay your usual outgoings if you rely on your book advance alone.

But, on a positive note, once you outsell your advance, you’ll start to receive royalties. Only a small percentage of books ever actually outsell their advance, and when they do, royalty cheques are usually only paid twice a year, so there could be a six month stretch between each payday. (Here’s a great article on book advances and royalties.) In short, until you’ve published several books and can command large advances, and are bringing in a good amount in royalties, you might want to keep your day job to make sure you can afford to eat and pay the bills.

Some authors are very open and honest about the publishing industry and the money they receive for their books. Mackenzi Lee (author of The Gentleman’s Guide to Vice and Virtue) often does Q&As on her Instagram Stories where she answers questions from readers and writers looking to publish, she’s definitely worth a follow (and if you haven’t read her books, I’d 100% recommend them!).

Even if you do get a book deal with a major publishing house, and they decide to invest some of their marketing budget in selling your book, you won’t be guaranteed a book tour, or a stand at YALC, or any advertising. You might find that you still have to organise and pay for these things yourself, if you choose to do them. You’ll likely have to pay for your own travel and accommodation if you do book signings and readings or attend festivals.

If you want to encourage pre-orders (a huge factor in whether a book is successful in its first week, effecting the author’s future advances etc.) you’ll probably have to organise your own pre-order offer, whether that’s a free enamel pin or a postcard with a character portrait you’ve had commissioned.

These marketing methods are all optional, but if you want your book to succeed and outsell its advance, and to improve your chances of selling your next book to a publisher, you will have to play a part in marketing it yourself.

(My day job is actually in marketing, so I’ll do a whole post on book marketing soon and link to it here when it’s live.)

For me, the biggest negative against trad-publishing is that you’re no longer able to write whatever you want. If you planned a trilogy but book one has poor sales, your publisher may not buy book two. You might have a brilliant idea for a space-western-thriller, but if your agent and publisher hate it there’s no point in writing it (unless you decide to do it in your spare time for fun or bonus free content – but now that writing is your job you won’t have as much time to write for fun/free, sadly).

Ultimately, there are some huge pros to traditional publishing, you’ll have the support and assistance of entire teams of qualified and experienced people, and you won’t have to worry about cover design, formatting, getting your book into shops or on Amazon, plus you’ll start earning money almost straight away. If you can get through the query trenches and find an agent, and get a publishing deal, it’s definitely worth taking the offer of traditional publishing, if only for the exposure you’ll receive and the contacts you’ll make. Just remember that it’s not all easy-breezy and wonderful, and you might not make as much money as you always imagined – especially not from your first book. Go in with your eyes wide open, and you could become hugely successful as a traditionally-published author.


The pros and cons of self publishing

Self publishing is the DIY option for getting your stories into the world, and that comes with lots of positives as well as a few negatives. First of all, you have complete control over what you write, your book’s title and cover, how much it costs for readers to buy and whether it becomes a six book series or remains a standalone. You get to decide when it’s released, where it’s available to buy or download, and how it’s marketed.

Unfortunately, this also means that you’re solely responsible for doing and funding all of the above. Which means spending a lot of time reading and researching, whether it’s genre standards your novel will need to fit, such as length and style, or cover design basics (your book should sit well next to others in its demographic and genre, so you’ll need to maintain certain elements of cover style to look like your book “belongs”, whilst also standing out enough to be picked).

You’ll either have to learn how to format your novel and convert it to the right file format, or pay someone else to do it for you. You’ll need to learn about publishing platforms and chose the right one for you, and decide whether to publish just an ebook or offer a print version too, via a Print-on-Demand service. Amazon’s Kindle Direct Publishing is probably the easiest and most well-known option, but you may also want to get your book into physical shops, and, you’ve guessed it, that all comes down to you with self publishing.

Ingram Spark, the other well-known self publishing service, will make your book available to book stores and libraries, but they have to know about it and request it, so you’ll still need to get the word out there about your book yourself.

You might have seen other books with cool features, such as maps, custom character artwork, quote prints and enamel pins, book trailers and fancy online ads where elements of the cover art appear to move. And there’s no reason why you can’t have any or all of these things, but unless you learn how to design and create them yourself, then you’re going to have to pay a professional to do it for you, and the cost of design and production can be prohibitive when you’re just starting out and haven’t made a penny from book sales yet. Fiverr is a good place to start, or search on Instagram and ask for recommendations from your online author friends.

You may need to build an author website, create a presence on certain social media (Twitter and Instagram have the biggest bookish communities), maybe even start a blog or email newsletter in order to reach your audience and build a readership. These can all be done completely free, but your time is your most valuable resource and you don’t want to waste it on marketing efforts that may or may not work for you.

Have you noticed I haven’t mentioned writing yet? Let’s assume that you’ve got a pretty solid book written already, it’s got a beginning, middle and end and an appropriate word count for your genre. (Here’s a great blog post on word counts by genre). In order to make it the best book it can be and get it ready for publication, you’ll need to get as many eyes on it as possible, and not just any old eyes, but other writers, readers who know and love your genre, and professional editors. (I wrote a post a while back about alpha and beta readers and critique partners, give it a read if you’re not sure which kind you need.) The only one of these that should cost you money is a professional editor, but I wouldn’t recommend skipping this step unless you yourself are a trained editor, and even then there’s definitely going to be something you miss as the author that another skilled editor will pick up on.

The most important thing a self published author needs is a community, as you’ve missed out on the all-important access that traditional publishing offers – you need to build a network around you of other writers, especially other self publishing authors who can support and advise you along the process. You want to find other writers in your genre to share manuscripts with and offer critiques and feedback, to recommend great editors, cover designers and marketing professionals, to you. To celebrate and commiserate with through the ups and downs, to share each others books and help spread the word to your audiences, and to become lifelong writer friends.

In summary, the biggest pro of self publishing is the freedom – deciding what to write and when to publish it, without falling prey to the whims of agents and publishing houses. And the biggest con is that you’ll have to do it all by yourself, or part with your hard earned cash to get professional help.


What is hybrid publishing?

In recent years, as self publishing has become so much more accessible, there has been a growing trend in hybrid publishing. As you can imagine, hybrid publishing refers to a combination of both traditional and self publishing. For example, an author who has a traditional publishing deal for an ongoing series of crime thrillers may also love writing cosy mysteries, but their publisher doesn’t want to damage the brand they’ve built up in the author’s name, so they won’t publish the cosy series. The author may choose to self publish, possibly even under a pseudonym, as long as it wouldn’t impact on their publishing deal.

Some authors start off as self publishers, but are eventually discovered by an agent or publisher who loves what they write and offers them a contract. They might continue to publish some books themselves whilst also writing for the publisher, or they may leave their previous publications up and go fully trad-pub, having gotten their big break as a self-pubbed author.

Whichever way it works out, hybrid publishing may be the best option for a lot of writers. Say you have an idea you know the big publishing houses are desperate for right now, you could write and query that, whilst self publishing the strange little story that whispers in your head at night, but that you know no agent or publisher will want to touch. There are almost no limits to hybrid publishing (as long as you keep to any contractual terms and conditions), so it’s worth considering when deciding whether to trad-pub or self-pub – you don’t have to choose just one!


Now you know the basics of traditional publishing, self publishing and hybrid publishing and can make an educated decision when the time comes to send your words out into the world. Let me know how you plan to publish, or if you are already a published author then how you decided which way to go!

Lyndsey

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Writing dual timelines

Hello friends! This month, I’m taking you guys along on another research mission for my current WIP, COCKLE SHELLS AND SILVER BELLS. After outlining the plot months ago, I’ve now decided to add a second timeline set forty years earlier, using a secret diary as the mode of delivery for my additional POV. I’ve never done anything like this before, so I’ve been reading everything I can on the subject, and I thought some of you might be interested in what I’ve learned.


Adding a second timeline

Whose point of view?

So you’ve decided to add a secondary timeline to your novel, but you’re not quite sure how to go about it. First things first, you need to decide whether the POV will be your MC, or another character. Are you trying to show how earlier events lead to your character’s current situation? Was it their own doing, or a parent/ancestor? Maybe you’re writing a thriller or crime novel and want to include a timeline with one of the killer’s previous victims to show what could happen to your MC if they don’t get away. Dual timelines can (and should) both build tension and include exposition to keep your readers’ interest, so keep that in mind when deciding whose POV to use.


How to frame it

There are several ways you could frame the second timeline, aside from simply stating the name and date at the beginning of each chapter. Here are a few fun ideas:

  • A diary or letters
  • Flashbacks/memories
  • Cassette tapes, a la 13 Reasons Why (or a vlog perhaps)
  • Police records and interviews, a la Carrie
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How often should you switch between timelines?

Next, you need to think about the weight you want to give your secondary timeline. Is it strong enough to take up 50% of the novel? Is it more of a supporting subplot? It’s your choice how much of the story is spent in timeline number two, but it should be a significant enough amount that it couldn’t be cut without seriously affecting the story.

Whether you alternate every single chapter, or throw in a flashback every fifty pages, make sure your secondary timeline plot is essential to the story. You don’t want readers to skip to the next chapter whenever they reach a time change, but don’t worry too much about readers preferring one to the other – they probably will.


Writing your dual timeline novel

There are two main methods for writing your novel once you’ve decided on your two POVs and their plot points:

  • Write each timeline continuously and alternate them during editing.
  • Flip between timelines and write the novel as you intend it to be read.

Each has their merits, and it’s up to you to decide which one works best for you and your story. For my WIP, I plan to write through the main story from start to finish, leaving bullet points in the places where the diary entries will come up so I know which bits of narrative exposition have been revealed. Then I’ll go back and write the diary so I can really immerse myself in my second POV character and her 1970s time period.


A few final tips

As with any multi POV novel, your character voices need to be distinct. Even if your second timeline is still in your MCs voice, it should be clear that something has changed, especially if your character is considerably younger/older in your two timelines.

Make the transition between POVs connected in some way, i.e. make the exposition relevant to the main timeline and your MCs current conflict. If you’re writing a mystery, you could include a series of clues and red herrings, and use each time change to reveal the significance, or insignificance, of each one. This will keep your readers guessing and make sure they don’t skim over your secondary timeline, as they’d miss crucial exposition.

Read as many books with a similar narrative style to your planned WIP as possible before you start. This is where I’m up to with my outlining, so if you have any recommendations of books with a secondary timeline and POV using diaries or letters pop them in the comments please!


I hope you found that as useful as I did! It’s not as daunting as it seems at first glance, all it takes to write a novel with two timelines and two POV characters is a little extra planning and research. Good thing I’m a card carrying plotter then!

Until next time!

Lyndsey

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Beautiful Books 2017

It’s October, and that means NaNoWriMo is almost upon us! It also means Beautiful People, the monthly meme hosted by Cait @ Paper Fury and Sky @ Further Up and Further In, becomes Beautiful Books, where we talk about our current projects or what we’re planning to write during November.

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What inspired the idea for your novel, and how long have you had the idea?

COCKLE SHELLS & SILVER BELLS is a YA contemporary fantasy inspired by The Secret Garden, with supernatural themes, LGBTQIA+ characters and a remote seaside setting on the North Yorkshire coast. It’s a combination of a few ideas I had scribbled in my notebook, some for a YA contemporary about a girl who moves to a quiet seaside town and falls for the girl who works at the local ice cream parlour, and some for a modern Bloody Mary story. I started piecing it together about six months ago when I thought I was finished with my other MS, THE FAIR QUEEN, and was outlining for Camp Nano in July.

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Describe what your novel is about!

My MC is an orphan who, on turning 18, inherits her family estate on the North Yorkshire coast. There, she comes across the charming but mysterious housekeeper and groundskeeper, a petite, mermaid-haired firecracker called Dillon, a sassy cat with a bizarre habit of turning up at opportune moments, and a friendly ghost with the key to her family’s secrets.

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What is your book’s aesthetic? Use words or photos or whatever you like!

I’m hoping to combine the atmospheric moodiness of classic novels by the Bronte sisters, like Wuthering Heights and Jane Eyre, and whimsical fantasy elements of books by Maggie Stiefvater. I was initially hoping to venture into YA contemporary, but my fantasy heart wouldn’t allow it, so I had to throw in a few magical bits and bobs!

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Introduce us to each of your characters!

Marie ‘Em’ Haigh – Em is 18 and an orphan, she grew up in Provence, France until the age of 10 when her parents were killed in a car accident and she moved to North Yorkshire to live with her great uncle Archie on his farm. She’s pretty isolated and self-reliant, having been home schooled on the farm. She writes gender bent Pride and Prejudice fan fiction on Tumblr and her friends are all either online or fictional. Until she meets Dillon…

Dillon Thackeray – Dillon is a petite, curvaceous lesbian with pastel coloured mermaid hair and an array of neon running gear. She works at the ice cream parlour during the holidays, and goes to university a couple of hours away during term time. She’s a confident and outspoken girl with big dreams and an even bigger heart.

Clemence – Em names Clemence ironically (it means mild and merciful). This cat couldn’t be any saltier, but ultimately she helps Em find some pretty crucial information and leads her to various important items throughout the story. She’s sort of like Em’s spirit guide, but with added sass. Plus I just really like the name Clemence, like Clemence Poesy.

Billy and Maggie Partridge – the Haigh family’s resident housekeeper and groundskeeper. They come with the house, but there might be something more to them…

Ghost boy – I haven’t decided on a name for my spook yet, but he represents Colin, the boy with vitamin D deficiency in The Secret Garden. I haven’t fully outlined his role in the story, but I’m thinking something along the lines of a twin brother to Em’s father who died in childhood and was never spoken of again because it was too painful for the family… Any suggestions on this front would be gratefully received!

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How do you prepare to write? (Outline, research, stocking up on chocolate, howling, etc.?)

I’m a proud plotter, so I have a document full of notes, character bios, summaries of the chapters/acts etc. I do quite a bit of research before I start drafting, I choose names that mean something, either by googling baby name meanings until I find what I’m looking for, or naming characters after famous/fictional people who they share something in common with. Then, especially for Nano so I can keep track of where I am up to, I create a spreadsheet with thirty or more scenes or important events that I need for the story. I find that outlining quite rigorously helps me to keep writing even when I don’t feel motivated, and if I want to skip ahead to a juicier scene when I’m not in the mood, I can come back to where I was later.

Also, lots of tea or coffee and snacks, and breaks to walk the dogs and give me a chance to think through plot holes! Getting some fresh air and walking in nature does wonders for writer’s block.

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What are you most looking forward to about this novel?

All the spooky scenes where the ghost is messing with Em, before she actually discovers him. I’m hoping to give it a real Woman in Black vibe up until the point she meets the ghost and realises he’s just a young boy with no intention of hurting her, and he didn’t mean to scare her, he’s just been alone for so long. You’re really going to feel for this ghost, guys!

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List 3 things about your novel’s setting.

A beautiful, imposing manor house on a cliff’s edge, overlooking the North Sea.

A cutesy, vintage ice cream parlour full of cold treats and warm hearts.

A secret beach filled with cockle shells that feels like the edge of the world, but is actually where Em’s life really starts…

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What’s your character’s goal and who (or what) stands in the way?

Em is looking for two pretty conflicting things at the beginning of the book. She wants independence and to stand on her own two feet, she feels like she’s got a lot to prove after her parents’ deaths when she was just a little girl. She wants to make them, and her uncle Archie, proud. But she also wants to learn as much as she can about her family and feel closer to them, hence why she decides to move into Haigh Manor, leaving the farm. Unfortunately, most of her family are dead, and Archie is a pretty reticent old man with secrets of his own (he’s Em’s grandmother’s brother). Plus, Em’s social skills aren’t exactly up to scratch, she struggles with social anxiety and moving from one remote house to another does nothing to change that.

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How does your protagonist change by the end of the novel?

She opens up a lot, thanks to Dillon, and learns to accept her quirks for what they are. She finds a new passion, makes some great friends, and discovers more about her family history than she could ever have imagined. At the end, she’s a more mature, confident and content person. Plus she might fall in love…

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What are your book’s themes? How do you want readers to feel when the story is over?

The overall theme is hopefully going to be self-acceptance, Em is going to go through a pretty huge journey of self-discovery and growth that should give readers the feeling that she’s found herself in some ways. There’ll still be a way to go before she’s completely happy and comfortable in her own skin, but by the end of the book it should be clear that she’s headed in the right direction.

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That was so much fun! I hadn’t thought this much about CS&SB in months, and digging deep into the story and my characters has really given me a boost for Nano next month. I’m looking forward to reading more about all your WIPs, let me know in the comments if you’re taking part in Nano, and add me as a buddy, my username is lyndleloo!

Lyndsey

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