Beautiful People | Couples Edition

Well, hello there writer friends! This is my first Beautiful People link-up and I’m looking forward to getting to know my characters a little better, especially with the romantical undertones this month.

In January, I took part in my first Beautiful Books link-up, which you can check out here.

The link-ups are hosted by Cait of Paper Fury and Sky of Further Up and Further In, and involve answering ten questions about your current WIP. Beautiful Books covers your writing goals and progress, and Beautiful People is a chance to get up close and personal with your characters.

Let’s dive straight into the questions then! I’m answering these for my MCs Aria and Xander (you can find out more about my current WIP and my characters first if you like.)


  • How and why did they meet?

    Well, she saw him in her dreams, and then they bumped into each other at the circus, but they didn’t meet properly until he kidnapped her…so not the best first meeting.

  • What were their first impressions of each other?

    She thought he was just a figment of her subconscious until he knocked her unconscious, dragged her into the woods, and tried to convince her she was actually part of a fairy race. So obviously, she thought he was a crazed killer. He thought she was just some silly, useless girl he had been tasked with finding and bringing home. But, after a few weeks of surveillance he realised there was more to her than that, and maybe the prophecy wasn’t a fairy tale invented by the villagers to give them hope.

  • How would they prove their love for each other?

    That’s an interesting question. Xander isn’t the best at expressing himself, and Aria isn’t sure she sees any redeeming qualities in him anyway. Being the noble, self-sacrificing type that he is, Xander would probably die for her. Aria, on the other hand, would probably pretend she liked his terrible taste in music or eat his bad cooking to show how she felt about him. Basically, they’re both awful at relationships.

  • What would be an ideal date?

    They would go to a circus like the one where they first saw each other. Xander would show off his strength at the strongman game and Aria would play at giving the trained animals funny commands, trying to make him laugh. They’d eat candy floss and Xander would win Aria an enormous cuddly toy, and pretend he didn’t notice when she slipped her hand in his.

  • Is there something they emphatically disagree on?

    Almost everything. Aria doesn’t believe Xander when he says she’s the Salamander King’s daughter, she doesn’t think the prophecy refers to her, she doesn’t even think she’s really Fair – she’s just a normal girl and she wants to go home. Xander doesn’t want her to discover her abilities or learn to use them, he doesn’t want her getting involved in battling the Solitary at all, in case she gets hurt or killed. And their opinions of what is acceptable in the pursuit of justice for their people couldn’t be any more different.

  • List 5 “food quirks” they know about each other. (Ex: how they take their coffee, if they’re allergic to something, etc….and feel free to mention other non-food quirks!)

    Xander knows Aria loves doughnuts, and she doesn’t like eating rabbit or pheasant cooked over a campfire, but sometimes needs must. He knows she likes coffee, but not the super strong, black coffee Quade makes. Aria knows that Xander hardly eats when food is scarce, letting his brothers and her take his share. She also knows he can’t handle his drink…

  • What’s one thing they know about each other that no one else does?

    Hmm. How to answer without getting too spoilerific… Aria knows how much the pressure of being the eldest son and crown prince weighs on Xander’s shoulders. The responsibility of one day being king. Xander knows how powerful Aria truly is, even more powerful than she realises herself.

  • What’s one thing that they keep a secret from each other?

    Again with the spoilers! Aria doesn’t admit to Xander that she’s actually in love with her best friend, Jasper. Xander has so many secrets I don’t even know where to start. Let’s just say he knows a lot more about Aria and the truth of her situation than he reveals.

  • How would their lives be different without each other?

    Aria would still be living in peace and blissful ignorance in the Human Realm, but she would never discover the truth about who she really is, or learn about her Fair abilities. Xander would still be watching his people suffer as a result of the war and the oppression of the Celeste King. He’d probably still believe that the end justified any means, and be willing to sacrifice or betray anyone and anything to bring peace to his kingdom.

  • Where do they each see this relationship going?

    I think their opinions on this are probably mutually exclusive. Xander hopes that Aria will take her rightful place as the heir to the Salamander throne, making her a suitable bride for him as Gnome Crown Prince. However, if she chose to stay on and become Salamander Queen it would make the relationship complicated. Perhaps he hopes they could bring the two kingdoms together under both of them, creating a lasting peace. Aria, on the other hand, wants to help bring peace to the Fair Realm in whatever way she can, and then go back home to her parents and best friend in the Human Realm.

 

Wasn’t that fun? I love seeing how my characters react to different situations and how they feel about things I’ve never considered. Now it’s your turn, answer the ten questions on your blog and share the link on Paper Fury and Further In and Further Out. While you’re at it, check out some of the other answers from writers taking part in the link-up.

 

Until next time!

 

Lyndsey

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Currently reading:

Paperback

The Girl on the Train by Paula Hawkins

 

Audiobook

The Muse by Jessie Burton

 

Word count: 69,323

(About to start my second draft, wish me luck!)

Plotter vs. Pantser

First things first, I finished my first draft this week!! *does a little dance*

It’s around 70k words right now, and I’ve got plenty of notes about scenes I want to add, remove and rewrite, so who knows how long it will be in the end!

On that note, I thought I’d look at the pros and cons of being a plotter vs. a pantser today.

 

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New to the terms? A plotter is someone who plots their novel out before writing it. A pantser is someone who “flies by the seat of their pants”.

I’ll be honest, I’m a card-carrying plotter, so this blog may be slightly biased, but I can definitely appreciate the creativity and freedom afforded by pantsing. It’s just not for me.

And that’s OK!

Both methods have pros and cons, not least because everyone is different. What works for one may not work for another.

That’s the beauty of art, it’s completely subjective.

So, whether you spend longer outlining your novels than you do writing them, or you sit down with a pen and notepad and just start scribbling, you might learn something from your creative counterparts that could help you improve your craft.

Let’s look at plotters…

 

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There are as many different kinds of plotter as there are writers in the world, so don’t worry if you don’t identify with every word here.

Plotters tend to have an idea of what they are going to write before they start. Whether that’s just a broad concept of theme, a few character traits and maybe a general idea of setting, or a Filofax full of notes, character profiles and a scene by scene outline.

I only started writing seriously last year, and I read a lot of blogs and articles about novel writing before I sat down at my laptop to start chapter one. Mainly by Kristen Kieffer of She’s Novel, Faye Kirwin of Writerology and Christine Frazier of Better Novel Project. I learned a lot about writing in general, and picked up some brilliant tips for crafting a novel that readers will love.

I had an idea of what I wanted to write – I love YA fantasy and knew that was going to be the genre for my first novel (I’ve toyed with making it Middle Grade while writing, but decided against it). I also had a setting in mind – Sherwood Forest, or a fictionalised version, as I live nearby – and a vague idea of plot. I wanted my protagonist to be a teenage girl who discovers a hidden, magical world and learns about her true self over the course of the book.

So, with these things in mind, and a Word doc full of notes and snippets of potential scenes, I sat down to write.

I wrote about 15,000 words in September and October, and then I discovered NaNoWriMo. I stumbled upon the term on Twitter and Googled it, and I’m so glad I did. I decided to join in, knowing that I wasn’t exactly speeding through my first draft at this rate.

In preparation for my first NaNo, I read a bunch of blogs on how to get the most out of it. The one that helped me the most was from Better Novel Project – Day-by-day NaNoWriMo outline: your 30 day cheatsheet. Essentially, this is a list of thirty scenes that you need for your novel, a sort of skeleton framework that you then complete with your own ideas and plot points.

This is the single most helpful idea that I have come across since starting writing. I didn’t follow the framework religiously, but creating a list of thirty scenes I knew I needed to write meant that I always had something to write about during November. I never struggled with where to take the story next, and when I wasn’t feeling inspired I could skip ahead to a different scene.

This level of structure and discipline really worked for me. It’s not for everyone, but I intend to do something similar every time I plot a novel, NaNoWriMo or not. Having a spreadsheet of scenes worked better for me than having a list of events for each chapter or act. I need a more detailed plan with key plot points laid out in order – I can always insert subplots and rearrange the order at a later date.


So, what are the pros for plotters?

  • You know where your story is ultimately headed and are less likely to veer off track
  • Your characters are unlikely to behave in unexpected, contradictory ways
  • You won’t struggle for something to write (goodbye, writer’s block!)
  • You know what your next scene/plot point is and you just need to figure out how to get there
  • You’re left with a framework that will allow you to go back and add scenes and subplots with ease
  • You’ll probably finish the book before your pantser friends (not including the time you spent outlining!)

Cons?

  • You’re not as free to make major changes whilst writing, or risk making your whole outline irrelevant
  • When the muse strikes, you might fight it rather than let it flow through you
  • If a new scene or character presents themselves you need to figure out where they fit into your plan
  • Lots of writers start writing without any idea of how the story will conclude, they like the freedom and excitement of seeing where the story takes them – plotting sort of ruins that
  • Plotting can make it difficult to be creative, many writers feel too restricted by a rigid outline

Any other pros or cons for being a plotter? Leave them in the comments!

Now, let’s take a look at pantsers…

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Ah, pantsers. You’re much braver than I!

Pantsers range from those with a vague idea of where they want the story to go, to those who start with only a blank page and an open mind.

The main risk with pantsing is writer’s block. Without an outline, it can be easy to lose momentum and struggle with where to take your characters and their stories.

On the other hand, the freedom to write whatever you want must be fantastic for many creatives. With no rules and no restrictions, some incredible and individual works of art can be created.


What are the pros of being a pantser?

  • Freedom to write whatever, whenever, and wherever you like (within the story that is, please don’t write while driving!)
  • Flexibility – don’t like a character? Kill them. Don’t like where you plot is going? Change it.
  • Some of the best ideas have come out of the random scribblings of a writer just playing around, trying something new or breaking the rules
  • If freewriting or writing sprints help you to get into the right mindset for writing, pantsing may just be for you!

And cons?

  • Writer’s block is every writer’s worst nightmare, and pantsers are more likely to be struck down by it as they don’t have a plan to follow
  • Without an outline, it can be easy to get off track and wind up with a long and rambling middle section that will need a lot of editing to tighten up
  • Your characters may start acting ‘out of character’ if you don’t decide beforehand on their personalities, backgrounds and motivations
  • Writing about ancient Egyptian Gods? Corruption in local flower competitions? You’re going to have a lot of research to do when you get to draft number two! Make one too many mistakes in your assumptions and your entire plot could wind up on the cutting room floor.

 

Are you a plotter or a pantser? Or a ‘plantser’? What are the pros and cons of your method? Dish the dirt in the comments!

 

Lyndsey

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What’s on my TBR?

Allow me to clarify: by ‘to be read’, I mean books and audio books I am in possession of that I am yet to read. I know some book bloggers use the term TBR for books they intend to acquire, books on their Goodreads ‘to read’ list etc. but here, I’m talking about books I could literally pick up and start today, if I were so inclined.

I’m currently reading The Sleeping Prince by Melinda Salisbury, and I just finished listening to Career of Evil by Robert Galbraith (J.K. Rowling) this morning on my way to work. I really enjoyed it, and it was fun to see JK trying out a different genre.

I started watching the BBC adaptation of The Casual Vacancy years ago when it was on, but I wasn’t hooked and didn’t watch the end. I haven’t read the book – if you have, was it good? Should I read it?

I recently read that the three Cormoran Strike novels are also being adapted by the BBC and will be shown later this year, so I guess I’d better read the other two sharpish! Career of Evil is the third – I didn’t realise this when I downloaded the audio book in Audible’s sale -so I’m a bit behind, but luckily the book is crafted so that you don’t need to have necessarily read the other two first.

Right! Onwards to my TBR…

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Paperbacks

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The Girl on the Train by Paula Hawkins

I wanted to read this before the film came out so I could watch the film and compare. I didn’t get round to reading it in time, so I didn’t see the film either…  Sound logic, I’m sure. Anyway, I want to read this over the next couple of months so that as soon as the film comes on Sky Movies I can watch it.

Basically, Rachel takes the same train to work everyday and looks out at the same houses and sees the same people going about their lives. One day, one of the people she watches goes missing and Rachel becomes a witness, and then a suspect. It has an unreliable, alcoholic narrator, and the film trailer looked really dark, so I’m pretty excited about it!

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Rebel of the Sands by Alwyn Hamilton

This has been on my wishlist for a while, I bought it when I had a bit of a book binge a couple of months ago and I’m desperate to get to it.

It’s set in an exotic desert nation and has sharpshooters, mythical beasts and magic wielding djinni (genies). What’s not to love?

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The Shadow Queen by C.J. Redwine

A dark Snow White retelling where the princess has magic and the huntsman and the prince are one and the same?  Yes please!

I’ve seen good and bad reviews of this one – some thought it was too dull and boring, others loved it – so I’m going to give it a chance. It sounds right up my street, I love fairy tale retellings and YA fantasy.

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Once Upon a Dream (Twisted Tales) by Liz Braswell

Another fairy tale retelling, this time based on Sleeping Beauty. Liz Braswell was tasked with writing dark and twisted versions of all our favourite Disney fairy tales, for this one she took from the animated Sleeping Beauty as well as the live action Maleficent.

The key difference to the originals is that instead of waking the princess when the prince kisses her, he also falls under the spell, entering the dream world where Aurora has been trapped for years.

I’ve seen mainly bad reviews for these reimaginings, but I’m an open-minded, kind-hearted type of girl, so I’m hoping to enjoy this.

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Who is Tom Ditto? by Danny Wallace

Funny story, I actually ‘acquired’ this book from a cottage I stayed at with my husband and dog. There were a few books in the TV cupboard, I didn’t think they’d miss this, presumably another visitor left it behind… Either way, it wound up coming home with me.

One of the few contemporary novels on this list, this one is written by a British filmmaker, TV presenter and comedian, so I have high hopes for a light-hearted, funny read. I need a little light between the dark sometimes.

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The Diabolic by S.J. Kincaid

I received this book in November’s Illumicrate, a bookish subscription box. This was my first Illumicrate and I am so excited for next month’s (it’s a quarterly subscription) because it is actually going to include TWO books, one which hasn’t even been released yet!

November’s also included the cutest socks from Happy Socks, a coffee cup cosy from Sparrow + Wolf, a notepad for my ‘Evil Plans’ by House of Wonderland, an Aidan candle from Meraki Candles – I believe Aidan is a character from Illuminae, but I haven’t read it yet. It smells of sandalwood and bergamot (I do love a nice cup of Earl Grey) and is absolutely delicious. There were also lots of other little bookish bits, like a bookmark and postcards, a signed book plate and cute Christmas tag.

I’m really excited to read The Diabolic, it follows Nemesis, a cyborg designed to protect a galactic Senator’s daughter, Sidonia. Having grown up side by side, they’re practically sisters, as well as cyborg and master, so when Sidonia is summoned by an evil Emperor to be a hostage, Nemesis goes in her place and must impersonate Sidonia. As a humanoid – but not human – cyborg, Nemesis shouldn’t feel, but perhaps she is more human than she seems…

 

Audio books

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The Muse by Jessie Burton

I just started listening to this today on my way home from work. I haven’t read The Miniaturist, but I know it got a lot of hype when it was released. From what I’ve read on Goodreads, The Muse is even better.

Odelle is a Trinidadian woman living in 1960s London, working as a typist at an art gallery when a mysterious lost masterpiece is delivered to the gallery. The painting’s history takes us back to rural Spain in the 1930s, and another ambitious young woman with a fascinating story.

How good does that sound? I’m enjoying it already and I’m only an hour in!

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The Scorpio Races by Maggie Stiefvater

Having read the Wolves of Mercy Falls series, and the Books of Faerie, I’m a pretty big Stiefvater fan. I’ve heard that The Scorpio Races and especially The Raven Cycle are absolutely fantastic, so I had to add them to my wishlist.

I thought I’d start with The Scorpio Races as it’s a standalone.

About teenagers who ride flesh-eating water horses in a deadly competition, how could I not love this book?

So, there you have it. My TBR for the next couple of months. Actually, I’m not that fast a reader, the books will take me several months to read, but the audio books will definitely be done by the end of February, when I fully intend to move onto The Raven Cycle.

What’s on your TBR for the not-too-distant future? I’d love to know!

Lyndsey

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