Replenishing the creative stores

Happy February folks! I think February might be my favourite month (except maybe August, because it’s my birthday). Both my brothers’ and my Dad’s birthdays are in Feb, and of course we have Pancake Day and Valentine’s Day, so plenty of excuses to celebrate and eat lots of yummy treats. It’s short, which means payday is right around the corner, and if we’re lucky there are a few mild days and the snowdrops and crocuses come out, reminding us that Spring isn’t far off.

In today’s post, I wanted to focus on one of the most important non-writing elements of being a writer – consuming content to replenish the creative stores.

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As you’ll know if you’ve been around here a while, I’m currently trying my hand at a slightly more contemporary YA story, rather than my usual fantasy, and I’m finding it kind of hard going. Something I’ve realised recently is that, whilst I’ve read hundreds of YA fantasy novels in my life, I haven’t read anywhere near as many contemporaries, and I now see why my first novel, The Fair Queen, came to me so easily, and my current WIP is eluding me at every comma and full stop. I need to build up my contemporary creative stores – or completely rework my WIP to make it a full on fantasy, instead of the wishy-washy contemporary-with-fantastical-elements I’m currently churning out like a particularly stubborn batch of butter.

While I decide how to proceed with that, here are a few tips and ideas for replenishing your own creative stores in between writing projects, or when you’re struggling to connect with your muse.


Read widely

When you’re deep in drafting or editing mode, you might want to avoid reading other books in your genre for fear of seeing similarities everywhere you look. However, when you’re trying to formulate an idea for your next WIP, you’ll definitely want to get your hands on as many new novels in your chosen genre as possible, so you can see what’s currently popular, what the publishing houses are buying and your potential readers are loving. In addition, you should throw in a few bestselling books from other genres and age ranges – if you write YA, pick up a couple of MG and adult novels; if you write fantasy, grab a few contemporaries and historical novels.

Reading widely will give you a much bigger pool of plot devices to draw from, inspiration for new characters and settings, and maybe even sentence structure and word choice ideas. Plus, borrowing from novels outside your own genre means any similarities in the end result of your novel will be almost completely unrecognisable – and, honestly, there’s nothing unique in this world, so it won’t matter to agents or readers (as long as you don’t plagiarise, of course).


Watch more TV

There you go, I’m giving you a legitimate excuse to binge watch that new series on Netflix! Seriously though, you don’t have to take all your inspiration from books just because you’re an author, the writing on some of the best shows and movies is just as good, if not better than many books (sacrilege, I know). I don’t mean literary adaptations, which are almost universally inferior to the original, I think we can agree, but when a screenwriter has crafted a beautiful story that works perfectly with their chosen media, it’s definitely a valuable source of inspiration.

One thing TV and film do well is dialogue, with a tight word limit to work with, keeping conversations short, to the point, but still gripping and effective is a real challenge. If one of your writing struggles is crafting credible dialogue, keep a notepad next to you when you watch TV and scribble down any snippets that could come in handy when you next sit down to write. It’s less about the specific words and phrases, and more about the overall flow of conversation, where the natural pauses fall and how you could convey tone by describing body language and actions in between lines.


People watch

Is this anyone else’s favourite pastime? You’re out and about, surrounded by strangers with lives just as full and fascinating as your own, listening to their conversations and imagining what they do for work, who they love, where they live. It’s basically a free character creation prompt.

Real life people aren’t as good for dialogue inspiration as you’d think, we pause too often, stumble over our words, repeat ourselves and change subject mid-sentence. Written dialogue needs to be cleaner, more concise and always have a purpose, you can’t afford to waste your word count on pointless pleasantries and nonsensical ramblings.

However, people watching is absolutely perfect for picking up mannerisms and reactions, for spotting the things we do when we think no one’s looking, and understanding the behaviour of people different to ourselves. If you’re an adult trying to write a YA novel, watch the teenagers you pass on your next day out, see how they behave around each other and how it differs when they’re with their parents. If you’re single and writing about a character who’s married with kids, keep an eye out for the mum in the supermarket trying to wrangle her toddler whilst stocking up on groceries for the family, what’s she buying? Is she patient with the kid, or visibly stressed out? Eavesdrop on the couple at the next table when you’re out for dinner, try and guess how long they’ve been together, how they met and what they’d do if an armed robber burst into the restaurant right at that moment. Would he protect her? Would she hand over her purse, or refuse?

Make it a game and you’ll never struggle for character ideas.


Get back to nature

One of the main things that inspired me when I was plotting and writing The Fair Queen was my local area (I lived near Sherwood Forest at the time), and I never failed to come back from a walk with my dog filled with inspiration for the setting of my next scene. I always have my phone with me, so I often took photos of interesting looking trees, or local wildflowers so I could Google them later and use them to inform my descriptions.

Even when I didn’t need any more direct inspiration for my novel’s setting, just going for a walk and getting some fresh air always helped me craft the next scene in my mind before heading home to write it. Whenever I struggled over a particular plot point I’d go over and over the idea in my mind whilst out for a walk, until I’d worked it out completely and unstuck myself. I can’t recommend it enough, even if you live in a city centre, just changing your environment for a while and possibly discovering a part of your home town you’d never seen before could provide you with the solution to your writing problem.


Writing requires a huge investment of creativity and conscious thought, so it makes sense that we need to refill the cup every now and then before we can pour from it again. These are just a few tips that have helped me when I’ve needed to replenish the creative stores and get inspired, hopefully they’ll work for you too. If you’ve got any other ways of making sure you’re not running on empty next time you sit down to write, leave them in the comments, I’d love to try some new ones!

Lyndsey

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In the query trenches

Hello lovely folks! As you’ve probably come to expect, I’m going to focus my post today on the stage of the writing/publishing process that I am currently at, which this time around is querying.

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My querying journey began back in October, after a little over a year of plotting, drafting, editing and polishing (read: procrastinating) my first novel. After entering Pitch Wars and not getting chosen, I didn’t have any more excuses to put off querying, so I decided to bite the bullet and jump into the trenches.


Crafting your query

As part of the Pitch Wars submission requirements, I had to have a query letter prepared, so I already had mine ready to go. If you’re just starting to think about writing your query letter, one of the best explanations I found for how to write a killer query came from bestselling author of Truthwitch, Susan Dennard’s blog:

Fortunately, as part of the PW community, I had the opportunity to share my query with hundreds of fellow writers and get a few opinions and suggestions (also known as critiques). It’s just as crucial to have a polished query as it is to have your manuscript at its absolute best, so once you’ve drafted your letter ask a few writer friends to give it a once over, or post in one of the many amazing Facebook groups for writers and see if anyone would be willing to take a look. A few of the writing groups I’m in that have been invaluable for support and advice are:

  • Your Write Dream (Kristen Kieffer)
  • Edit & Repeat (Zoe Ashwood)
  • #PITCHWARRIORS (Morgan Hazelwood)
  • PW Query Team! (Morgan Hazelwood)

Writing a synopsis

Most agents request a synopsis along with your query letter and sample chapters, and the usual format is one page, single spaced. The key difference between a synopsis and a query letter is whilst the query doesn’t give away the ending of your story, the synopsis does. Again, the best explanation for how to write an amazing synopsis that I found was from Susan Dennard, this time on the Publishing Crawl website:


Researching agents

Now your submission materials are ready to go, the next step is to make a list of the agents you want to query, their submission guidelines and contact information. As I’m in the UK, I use Lit Rejections list of UK literary agents to find out who accepts my genre (Young Adult), and where I can find them online. Websites and Twitter accounts are really handy resources for learning more about an agent, their tastes and what they’re looking for. Don’t just rely on the list sites as you never know how up to date a particular site may be, always check the agency website in case an agent has moved, or their preferences or submission guidelines aren’t correct.

Other places you can research agents include the #MSWL hashtag on Twitter or the Manuscript Wishlist website, Query Tracker and Publisher’s Marketplace.

I keep a spreadsheet of all the agents I want to query, with columns for the agency name, the agent’s name, email address or submission website,  submission guidelines, when I sent the query and whether/when they responded. I highlight the agents green when I send a query, and red when I receive a rejection, as well as putting the dates in, so I can see at a glance how many queries are still out.


Sending your query

A few tips to make sure you’re not rejected immediately, before the agent even reads your sample chapters:

  • Don’t paste the email address into the recipient box until you’re ready to send, that way you can never accidentally send a half-typed email.
  • Use the agent’s name and make sure you spell it correctly! (Simple, but effective.)
  • Triple check you’ve met the submission guidelines before clicking send – you can’t take it back once it’s winging its way through cyberspace.
  • Make sure you’ve formatted your pages and synopsis correctly – single-spaced, one-page synopsis, double spaced pages with indentations at every new paragraph, except the first of a chapter/scene.
  • Give everything one last read through before sending, I’ve seen agents say a misspelling or two in a query won’t put them off but it’s better to not give them any excuse, especially when the slush pile is huge. You want them to want to keep reading!

Expect rejection

We’ve all read stories of authors who bagged an agent within a week of starting to send queries, but the truth is that most agented authors sent over a hundred queries before they finally found their match. Rejection is a necessary part of the publishing journey, unfortunately, so get comfortable with the word no and don’t take it personally when your carefully crafted query receives a less than enthusiastic response.

One of my very first queries received an almost immediate rejection at 11pm because the agent didn’t accept YA. I’d been reading the bios of a couple of agents from the same agency and gotten muddled – well it was late and I’d probably been researching for hours. So that was a pretty embarrassing faux pas, but we all make mistakes and you’re unlikely to come out of this query trench without a few teensy snaffoos of your own!

This week, I received my first real rejections (I don’t count my little error as a real query) after starting to send queries back in October, and I couldn’t be happier! As my Dad said when I told him, despite some mild confusion as to why I was so excited to receive a rejection email, “You’ve got to kiss a few frogs before you find your prince”. The first was a form rejection, but the second was personal and stated that my submission had stood out amongst the many they received. Unfortunately, they just weren’t enthusiastic enough to represent my novel, but they wished me luck with it. It doesn’t get much more positive than that as a rejection!

And that’s where I am on my query journey, one step closer to finding the right agent who will fall in love with my book and want to represent me and it on the long road towards getting published. Fingers crossed 2018 is my year!

Where are you on the query journey, just starting out or deep in the trenches like me? Let me know how it’s going and what your most positive rejection email has been so far. Here’s hoping we all find our agents this year – next step, publishing deals!

Lyndsey

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Reading and writing goals for 2018

Hi friends, happy New Year! I hope you had a nice break over the holiday season and are looking forward to a great year ahead. At this time of year it’s customary to make some resolutions for the coming twelve months, but as most resolutions are abandoned by mid-January, I tend not to make any as it’s just setting yourself up for failure (unless you’re super dedicated and determined, which, alas, I am not). I do, however, have a few goals I’m working on and plan to continue for the rest of the year, and onwards.

Rather than the usual weight loss or new job type goals (neither of which are even thinkable right now as I’m currently 6 months pregnant – yay!), I’ve decided to make 2018 the year of self-care and mindfulness.

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2017 was a challenging year for many of us, for lots of different reasons. It was definitely one of the most difficult years of my life so far, and part of that was how I dealt with things and the coping mechanisms I had in place, or rather didn’t. I struggled with bouts of depression and anxiety due to various things in my personal life, but in the last few weeks I’ve been really focusing on self-care and trying to find ways and means to improve my own well being and mental health. I want to be as strong and healthy as possible for when this little one decides to make an appearance and turn our world upside down!

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Journaling

For Christmas, my beautiful soul of a sister-in-law bought me a gorgeous leather journal and a Harry Potter quill pen, which I obviously fell instantly in love with. I decided to start journaling as a way to get my thoughts and feelings out, to empty my busy mind after a long day and allow me to wind down.

As well as working through issues and negative thoughts and feelings, journaling allows you to remind yourself about all the wonderful things that have happened to you, your best memories, your favourite things and what you really like about yourself. I try to write at least two positive entries for every negative one. When I read back through my journal at the end of the year, or each month, or whenever I need a boost, I want to have more happy, uplifting entries than negative ones.

One of the key things I’m going to do this year is cut myself some slack when I don’t manage to keep to my goals, so if I don’t get around to journaling one day, or week, I’ll just start from wherever I am without beating myself up about it. I think one of the main reasons most resolutions are abandoned is because we tend to consider a slip-up as a complete failure, and we give up rather than try to persevere imperfectly. With self-care my main goal for 2018, I’m going to try and be kind to myself when I make mistakes or have minor slip-ups, in the grand scheme of things it won’t matter if I miss a day or two of journaling, it will matter if I manage to continue over the course of the year or even longer. It’s a new habit I’m trying to form, not a short-term fad, and I’m already feeling the benefits of getting my thoughts down on paper regularly.

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Reading

I fell a little behind on my Goodreads reading challenge in 2017, I had set my goal at 36 books and I think I managed 30, which is still several more than I managed the previous year so I’m proud of what I achieved, but I decided to readjust my goal for 2018. What with Baby Hall arriving sometime in early April, I doubt I’ll be able to improve on 30 so I’ve set myself a goal of 24 books. With my Audible membership I’m sure I can manage that, 12 audio books and 12 paperbacks sounds reasonable, right? New mums let me know, does reading a book a month seem doable? I might have to up my membership to two audio books a month….

In the August 2017 Illumicrate subscription box I got a Book Jar, which is a glass jar with a slit in the lid like a money jar, and I’ve filled it with slips of paper with the titles of books on my TBR to help me decide which book to read next. I’ve got at least ten unread books sitting on my shelf, and three audio books waiting in my Audible library, so that’s plenty to go on for now. Some of the books I own and haven’t gotten round to yet are:

  • The Hate U Give by Angie Thomas
  • Rebel of the Sands by Alywn Hamilton
  • Wintersong by S. Jae-Jones
  • Red Sister by Mark Lawrence
  • Truth or Dare by Non Pratt
  • The Waking Land by Callie Bates
  • Tales from the Shadowhunter Academy by Cassandra Clare
  • Tower of Dawn by Sarah J. Maas

Which should I read first?

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Writing

I attempted NaNoWriMo in November, but only managed around 10k, so I’ve got another 60k at least before my new WIP (Cockle Shells & Silver Bells) is even a completed first draft. Not only that, but I’ve been besieged by a new plot bunny for a YA historical fantasy inspired by Burke and Hare (tentatively titled The Resurrectionist) and it’s taking everything I’ve got to not abandon my current WIP and just write the new story.

My main writing goal for 2018 is to end up with a finished first draft of CS&SB, and if I manage that I’ll be absolutely chuffed. I don’t expect to get even a first round of edits done, let alone have something ready to send to my beta readers, but if I do that would be amazing. I’m pretty sure I’ll be far too busy and preoccupied to do any more than a few thousand words of writing, but I’m going to give it a try, and not give myself a hard time if I get to the end of 2018 without adding a single word to my WIP.

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So those are my goals for 2018: journal every day, read 24 books and finish the first draft of my WIP. What are your goals for the new year ahead? I’d love to hear what you’re working towards and how you’re planning to make 2018 a fantastic year for you, let me know in the comments.

 

Lyndsey

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